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by **godfather** » 20/07/10 22:01

The judge has made a decision for our JULY Silverpoet competition, and the winner is.................. !

Got ya, didn't I?

No, you've got to look at it yourself and read what has been posted here: http://silverpeers.com/index.php?option ... itstart=20

Congratulations to the winner.......GF

=D>

by **lynny** » 21/07/10 13:50

Well done ! I'll follow GF's example and keep you as this month's secret winner. :biggrin:

by **Dreamweaver** » 21/07/10 15:41

Sorry I've not put this up before you got tired of waiting! :oops:

Yes, you'll find and enjoy the Silverpoet for July at http://silverpeers.com/index.php?option ... itstart=20 and here are the Judge's comments.

Judge's Comments:

A poem that tells a delightful little story. There is imagery and action, progressing to a humourous conclusion, all told in unfaltering rhythm and rhyme.

Phrases in it breathe originality, as in
"this earthmound's beachy rise" and

"The cows were grazing peacefully

all lowing cow type sighs"

When it is read aloud there are good echoes of sound, too, as E in "seize a piece", with more Z sounds in Hazel/prize.
A poem to enjoy. Congratulations!........................................Dreamweaver

by **godfather** » 22/07/10 22:00

No, DW, I wasn't trying to steal your job, I honestly thought that you may have been very busy lately and overlooked the matter.
Sorry for barging in on your turf! :oops: