Let Forever be Forever

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Let Forever be Forever

Post by Mahalia » 13 Dec 2017, 15:17

Let Forever be Forever … Maureen Clifford © The #ScribblyBark Poet

Dance me to the end of love and never let me go
Say forever means forever – make me know it’s so.
Make me breathless with your hug and hold me heart to heart
‘twine your fingers here with mine let none pull us apart.

Dance me to the moon and back beneath a velvet sky
Let me gaze into your eyes and never ask you “Why?”
Share the dream with me my love and make it your dream too.
Honour vows we made today when both lips said “I do”.

When the time comes and we part as age steals us away
Wait for me, I’ll find you soon though may not be today.
Our forever was forever, your love claimed my soul
I’ll forever be just half – ‘tis you who makes me whole.
The Scribbly Bark Poet
see some scribbles here - http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/

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Re: Let Forever be Forever

Post by lynny » 14 Dec 2017, 10:07

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That is just beautiful Maureen! ❤️

I almost felt I could have sung it. It could be set to music.

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Re: Let Forever be Forever

Post by Mahalia » 14 Dec 2017, 11:20

Thank you Lynny :text-thankyou: I don't have a musical bone in my body sadly
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see some scribbles here - http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/

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Re: Let Forever be Forever

Post by Dusty » 14 Dec 2017, 12:22

Beautiful ,as always
I,m right into Craft, cant remember a flamin' thing

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Re: Let Forever be Forever

Post by Mahalia » 18 Dec 2017, 21:51

Thank you Dusty - pleased you found something in it to like :text-thankyou:
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see some scribbles here - http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/

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Re: Let Forever be Forever

Post by godfather » 18 Dec 2017, 22:11

Love the words, they really sound perfect for a romantic composition.

Now, put them to the music of "Fly me to the Moon....." and lynny really could sing the song!

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The devil whispered, “You cannot withstand the storm“ and I replied: “I am the storm!”.....Unknown.

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